Show that $a \notin acl_{\mathbb{M}}(A) \Longleftrightarrow$ exists an infinite indiscernible sequence over $A$ containing $a$.
$ \Rightarrow) a \notin acl_{\mathbb{M}}(A)$ then $\forall \phi(x,b) \in L(A)$ such that $\mathbb{M} \models\phi(a,b)$ we have that $\mid \phi(\mathbb{M},b) \mid $ is infinite, so let $(I, <)$ a set linearly ordered with $\mid I \mid=\mid\phi(\mathbb{M}) \mid$ where $\{ a_{i} \mid i \in I\}=\phi(\mathbb{M},b)$ ( every set can be well-ordered). Then $\{ a_{i} \mid i \in I\}$ is sequence indiscernible over $A$ since $\mathbb{M} \models \phi(a,b) \Leftrightarrow \phi(c,b), \forall c \in \{ a_{i} \mid i \in I\} $ (I think if this can be done for each element you can be done for each finite set in $\{ a_{i} \mid i \in I\}$) so $ \{ a_{i} \mid i \in I\}$ is sequence indiscernible over $A$ and $a \in A$. I'm not sure if my reasoning is valid. In the other direction I have no idea how it could be. I appreciate any hint.
Most importantly, note that your proof of the $(\Rightarrow)$ direction is incorrect, as it seems to use a weaker (and incorrect) definition for indiscernible sequence. It is not enough to show that every element in the sequence has the same type over $A$. I'll recall the definition of indiscernible sequence, then give a rough sketch of the proof of each direction.
That is, whether a formula possibly involving more than one element of the sequence holds doesn't change if we pick different elements from the sequence, as long as we pick them in the same order. (Note that sometimes we may want to consider the definition without the word "distinct", but the theorem you're trying to prove requires it.)
Of the two directions, $(\Leftarrow)$ is actually the easy one. If we know we have an indiscernible sequence, even only looking at $n = 1$, that means we have infinitely many distinct tuples, all with the same type as $a$ (over $A$). That type is therefore not algebraic.
The proof of $(\Rightarrow)$ is a little tricky if you haven't seen something similar before. We'll be making a sequence indexed by natural numbers. Also, note that we may have to pass to a sufficiently saturated, sufficiently homogeneous elementary extension to find the sequence. The key steps are as follows:
Last word: you should pay attention to the process of using Ramsey's theorem to build an indiscernible sequence, and work out the details for yourself. That technique forms an important tool for working with indiscernibles.