Given $v_1, \ldots, v_k \in V$ and $\phi_1, \ldots, \phi_k \in V^*$. If $\phi_1, \ldots, \phi_k \in V^*$ are linearly dependent, prove that $\det[\phi_i(v_j)] = 0.$ Here $k$ is the dimension of $V$, but I need to show this also works for a subspace with dimension $p$.
Assume $v_r$ is a linear combination of the others, as without loss of generality we consider in terms of basis. Denoting the matrix whose $i$th row and $j$th column is $\phi_i(v_j)$ to be $[\phi_i(v_j)]$. Then
$$[\phi_i(v_j)]= \pmatrix{ \begin{array}{cccccc} \delta_{11}&\delta_{12} & \ldots & \lambda_1 \delta_{11} + \cdots + \hat \lambda_r \delta_{1r} + \cdots + \lambda_p \delta_{1p} & \cdots & \delta_{1p}\\ \delta_{21}&\delta_{22} & \ldots & \lambda_1 \delta_{21} + \cdots + \hat \lambda_r \delta_{2r} + \cdots + \lambda_p \delta_{2p} &\cdots & \delta_{2p}\\ \vdots &\vdots & \ddots &\vdots & \ddots & \vdots\\ \delta_{r1}&\delta_{r2} & \ldots & \lambda_1 \delta_{r1} + \cdots + \hat \lambda_r \delta_{rr} + \cdots + \lambda_p \delta_{rp} &\cdots & \delta_{rp}\\ \vdots &\vdots & \ddots &\vdots & \ddots & \vdots\\ \delta_{p1}&\delta_{p2} & \ldots & \lambda_1 \delta_{p1} + \cdots + \hat \lambda_r \delta_{pr} + \cdots + \lambda_p \delta_{pp}&\cdots & \delta_{pp}\\ \end{array} } =\left( \begin{array}{cccccc} 1&0 & \ldots & \lambda_1 & \cdots & 0\\ 0&1 & \ldots & \lambda_2 & \cdots & 0\\ \vdots &\vdots & \ddots & \vdots &\ddots & \vdots\\ 0&0 & \ldots & 0 & \cdots & 0\\ \vdots &\vdots & \ddots & \vdots &\ddots & \vdots\\ 0&0 & \ldots & \lambda_p & \cdots & 1\\ \end{array} \right). $$ Hence, the determinant of $\phi_i(v_j)$ is zero.
After the comments clearing up stuff and the editing of the question we can now try to answer: since $\,\{\phi_1,\ldots,\phi_k\}\,$ is linearly dependent there exists a first element which is a linear combination of the preceeding ones, say
$$\phi_r=\sum_{n=1}^{r-1}a_n\phi_n\;,\;\;a_n\in\Bbb F$$
From here we get that for every $\;i\;,\;\;1\le i\le k\;$ , we have
$$\phi_r(v_i)=\sum_{n=1}^{r-1}a_n\phi_n(v_i)$$
Can you see then how the $\;r-$th row is a linear combination of the first $\,r-1\,$ first rows in the matrix $\,\left(\phi_i(v_j)\right)\;$? This, of course, means the determinant is zero.
I think you had the right idea but you messed things up with all those deltas and lambdas (=my $\,a_i'$s...)