Wondering if someone could check I have answered this correctly, I’ve just started a course on Group theory and don’t feel confident in ability so far. The Question asks: “Let $S$ be a finite set. Show that $\operatorname{Sym}(S)$ is a group.”
Much appreciated, L
Answer:
Let $X,Y,W,Z\subseteq S$ be groups such that $$\mu\colon X\to Y,\quad\Phi\colon Y\to W,\quad p\colon W\to Z$$ Then we have
$G0)$ Closure: Let $x\in X$ be arbitrary. Then $$\Phi\circ\mu(x)=\Phi(\mu(x))=\Phi(y)\in\operatorname{Sym}(S)$$ for some $y\in Y$.
$G1)$ Associativity: $$\rho(\Phi\circ\mu(x))=\rho(\mu\circ\Phi(x))=\rho(\Phi(\mu(x)))\in\operatorname{Sym}(S)$$ and $$(\rho\circ\Phi)\circ\mu(x))=(\Phi\circ\mu)\circ\mu(x))=\rho(\Phi(\mu(x)))\in\operatorname{Sym}(S)$$ Thus, $\operatorname{Sym}(S)$ is closed under associativity.
$G2)$ Identity: Let $\sigma\colon S\to S,\,s\mapsto es$, then $\sigma$ is identity map $\operatorname{Id}\colon S\to S$ $$\sigma(s)=es=s$$ where $e$ is the identity element of $S$.
$G3)$ Inverse: Let $f\colon X\to Y$ and $g\colon Y\to X$ be maps where $X,Y\subseteq S$ and $f,g\in\operatorname{Sym}(S)$. Then, $$f\circ g (y)=f(g(y))=e\quad\text{and}\quad g\circ f(x)=g(f(x))=e$$ $\Rightarrow g(y)=f^{-1}(y)$
Thus, $\operatorname{Sym}(S)$ is a group under composition.
Besides a few mistakes you made (for example, you swapped the order of composition in your proof of $G1$ which is not possible in general) you seem to not have the right definition of $\operatorname{Sym}(S)$ at hand and do not completely understand what you have to show.
So let's start there. We define $\operatorname{Sym}(S)$ for a finite set (at some point you seem to assume that $S$ is a group, which is not the case) $S$ as the set of all its permutations which are nothing else than bijective maps $S\to S$. Indeed, permuting the elements of $S$ is nothing else than swapping them around one-to-one and onto. Hence, $$\operatorname{Sym}(S)=\{f\colon S\to S\,\mid\,f\ \text{bijective}\}$$ Now, we want to show that this set is a group under composition. For example, we have to show that there is an element $e\in\operatorname{Sym}(S)$ such that $f\circ e=f=e\circ f$ for all $f\in\operatorname{Sym}(S)$. So you have to explicitely construct a bijective map $S\to S$ which behaves as identity under composition. I will include the solution under a spoiler:
The other group axioms follow using similar ideas.
There is a particular no need for introducing some subsets $X,Y,W,Z\subseteq S$ and maps between them. I think I understand what lead you to this discussion (namely, image considerations of maps $S\to S$) but it is unnecessary at best, highly confusing at worst.