I am trying to find the number of permutations $\pi\in S_{30}$ with $\pi(2)<\pi(3)$.
I worked out the answer as: $28!\times (1+2+\cdots+29)$.
My reasoning is: Suppose $\pi(2) = 1$ then there are $29$ possibilities for $\pi(3)$ and for each of these $29$ possibilities there are $28!$ permutations of the rest of the numbers $1,3,4,...,30$. We can do the same if $\pi(2) = 2$, but in this case the number of possibilities for $\pi(3)$ are $28$ and there are again $28!$ permutations for the rest of the numbers etc. Hence in total there are $28!\times (1+2+\cdots+29)$ possible permutations?
Your argument is correct. You can simplify your answer by writing $$1+2+\ldots+29=\frac{1}{2}\times29\times30.$$ Another way to get to the same answer, is by noting that either $\pi(2)<\pi(3)$ or $\pi(2)>\pi(3)$ holds for every permutation $\pi\in S_{30}$.