It's correct, though at the moment it's more a list of equations rather than a proof - I'd link the lines after the first integral with "hence as $\partial u/\partial \nu=\nabla u \cdot \nu$", "so by the divergence theorem" and "as $-\Delta u = f$" respectively.
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It's correct, though at the moment it's more a list of equations rather than a proof - I'd link the lines after the first integral with "hence as $\partial u/\partial \nu=\nabla u \cdot \nu$", "so by the divergence theorem" and "as $-\Delta u = f$" respectively.