Heres my proof for $Z^2$ not being a cyclic group can anyone confirm if this looks good.
Let $Z^2=\{ (a,b):a,b∈Z \}$
Since $Z^2$ is additive group, if it were cyclic there must be a fixed p,q such that $k(p,q) = (a,b)$ for any $ a,b∈Z$. So $(p,q) = (\frac{a}{k},\frac{b}{k})$. But if k doesnt divide a,b $(p,q)$ wont be integers and therefore not in the group so not cyclic.
Can anyone confirm if this is a valid proof
It is not correct. The assertion “if it were cyclic there must be a fixed $(p,q)$ such that $k(p,q) = (a,b)$ for any $a,b\in\mathbb Z$” is meaningless, since you say nothing about $k$.