Given the series $\displaystyle{\sum_{n=1}^{\infty}} \frac{1}{n! z^n}$ I have to show that it defines a holomorphic function in $\mathbb{C}-\{ 0 \}$ and then I have to calculate the integral of this function over the unit circle.
For the first point, it is sufficient to note that this is the Laurent series of a function which is holomorphic in the annulus of convergence. A rapid calculation of the $\text{lim} \frac{1}{n!}^{\frac{1}{n}}=0$ shows that the series is convergent in all of $\mathbb{C}$ without $0$ obviously.
Now, the function defined by this series is a function which is holomorphic in the domain of existence, but has a singularity in $0$, the nature of the singularity is essential, because the Laurent series of the function is the series given above which has a principal part which is not finite in number of coefficients. So I cannot utilise the residue formula for the integral.
But i noticed that the series is uniformly convergent in all the circle, so i can integrate term by term obtaining (for the generic $n$th-term) the following integral:
$$-\frac{1}{n!(n-1)} \int_{0}^{2\pi} \frac{\text{d}}{\text{d}\theta} e^{-i\theta(n-1)} \text{d}\theta$$
which is $0$ for every $n \in \mathbb{N}$. So that I can conclude that the integral is null.
Is my proof correct?
You wrote that what you have is a Laurent series, and you are right. So, you know that the residue of your function at $0$ is the coefficient of $\frac1z$, which is $1$. So, by the residue theorem, your integral is equal to $2\pi i$.
Your computation is obviously wrong, because you divide by $n-1$. What does that mean if $n=1$? If your series was $\displaystyle\sum_{n=2}^\infty\frac1{n!z^n}$, then you would be correct.