After being given the following definition of the least common multiple, $lcm$:
Let $R$ be a commutative ring with identity. Let $x,y\in R$. It is said that $m \in R$ is the least common multiplier of $x$ and $y$ if the following conditions are satisfied:
$x | m$ and $y | m$
If $x|m^{\prime}$ and $y|m^{\prime}$, then $m|m^{\prime}$
As is the case for the greatest common divisor in such a ring, I want to say that the $lcm$ is unique up to associates, meaning if $m$ and $m^{\prime}$ are both $lcm(x,y)$, then $m | m^{\prime}$ and $m^{\prime}|m$, and we write $m \sim m^{\prime}$.
To justify this, I give the following argument:
Suppose first that $m = lcm(x,y)$. Then this implies that $x|m$, $y|m$. If $m^{\prime}$ is any other multiple of $x$ and $y$ (including another alleged $lcm$), we also have that $x|m^{\prime}$, $y|m^{\prime}$. So, we must have that $m|m^{\prime}$.
Suppose instead that $m^{\prime} = lcm(x,y)$. Then this implies that $x|m^{\prime}$, $y|m^{\prime}$. If $m$ is any other multiple of $x$ and $y$ (including another alleged $lcm$), we also have that $x|m$, $y|m$. So, we must have that $m^{\prime}|m$.
Since both $m$ and $m^{\prime}$ are the $lcm(x,y)$, we must have that $m|m^{\prime}$ and $m^{\prime}|m$. Therefore, $m$ and $m^{\prime}$ are associates - i.e., $m \sim m^{\prime}$.
My question is whether my proof is correct and looks how it's generally supposed to look.
If not, how should I fix it?
Thanks in advance.
Your overall plan is good, but I think the phrasing of
is off. In both of these paragraph, you're actually assuming that both $m$ and $m'$ satisfy your definition, so you should make these two assumptions once and for all at the beginning of the proof.
And the notation $m = \mathit{lcm}(x,y)$ is not really fortunate when the concept is not the least common multiple, but a least common multiple. (Even in good old $\mathbb Z$ there will generally be two least common multiples, namely a positive one and its opposite).
So the beginning should be written something like