All the lengths in red had been given in the problem statement. The task is to find $BC$. The green ones were calculated from the information in red.
Here's two ways I tried to solve it (and I would like feedback):
The green line is drawn parallel to $QC$. Suppose, the other unlabelled end of the green line be point $R$. So the line can be called $PR$.
In $\triangle BPR$,
$PC=QC=9, \space\space PC=3\times AP\\PB=6, \space\space PB=3 \times AQ\\\therefore \triangle BPR \sim \triangle APQ\\BD=4\times3, \space\space \boxed{BD=12}$
In quadrilateral $PQCD$, opposite sides are parallel to each other and it is therefore a parallelogram. So $DC=4$.
$BC=BD+DC\\BC=12+4\\\boxed{BC=16}$
In $\triangle ABC$, $AB=2+6=2(1+3)=\boxed{2\times 4}\\AC=3+9=3(1+3)=\boxed{3\times 4}\\BC=?$
In $\triangle APQ$, $AP=\boxed{2}\\AC=\boxed{3}\\PQ=4$
$\because \triangle ABC\sim \triangle APQ,\\BC=PQ\times4=4\times4=16,\\\boxed{BC=16}$

There are so many typos that it's kind of hard to read your proof.
Your solution is extremely sloppy.
Don't take this the wrong way. It's very obvious to me that you correctly solved the problem. You used the correct similar triangles to calculate all the values. Your answer in the end is correct.
But your description showing how you got to the answer is a horrible mess. If I was grading this solution, I would give you maybe half of all possible points.