We know that $\frac{1}{2}+\frac{1}{3}+\frac{1}{4}+\frac{1}{5}+\cdots$ diverges.
So, $T=\frac{1}{n.2}+\frac{1}{n.3}+\frac{1}{n.4}+\frac{1}{n.5}+\cdots$=$\frac{1}{n}$$(\frac{1}{2}+\frac{1}{3}+\frac{1}{4}+\frac{1}{5}+\cdots)$ diverges too for any natural number $n$.
Now, we can easily show that $S>T$ since $n$ can take greater value than the difference between the denominators of any two consecutive terms of $S$.
Therefore, $S$ diverges too.
EDIT: $S$ is the sum of the reciprocals of the primes.
EDIT 2: $n$ can take any natural numbered value greater than the largest distance between any two consecutive primes.
Your proof is not correct. You say:
It is true that if $p_1,p_2$ are two consecutive terms of $S$ (i.e., two consecutive primes) then we can find some $n$ such that $n>p_2-p_1$. However, in order to use this to show that $S$ diverges, we would need to find an $n$ such that $n>q_2-q_1$ for all pairs of consecutive primes $q_1,q_2$.
This is impossible. Indeed, for any $n$, the numbers $n!+2,n!+3,\dots,n!+n$ are not prime and so there must be a pair of consecutive primes that differ by at least $n$.
If your claim were true, then the sequence $S$ would diverge at least as quickly as any sequence $T_n$. But we know this to be untrue: the harmonic series diverges like $\log(n)$, while the sum of the reciprocals of the primes diverges like $\log(\log(n))$.