Here is Prob. 11, Chap. 6, in the book Principles of Mathematical Analysis by Walter Rudin, 3rd edition:
Let $\alpha$ be a fixed increasing function on $[a, b]$. For $u \in \mathscr{R}(\alpha)$, define $$ \lVert u \rVert_2 = \left\{ \int_a^b \lvert u \rvert^2 \ \mathrm{d} \alpha \right\}^{1/2}. $$ Suppose $f, g, h \in \mathscr{R}(\alpha)$, and prove the triangle inequality $$ \lVert f-h \rVert_2 \leq \lVert f-g \rVert_2 + \lVert g-h \rVert_2 $$ as a consequence of the Schwarz inequality, . . .
My Attempt:
Here is the link to my Math SE post on the Minkowski's inequality for Riemann-Stieltjes integrals:
Minkowski Inequality for Riemann-Stieltjes Integrals
Supposing that $f, g, h$ are complex functions in $\mathscr{R}(\alpha)$ on $[a, b]$, we obtain $$ \begin{align} & \lVert f-h \rVert_2 \\ &= \left( \int_a^b \lvert f-h \rvert^2 \, \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{1/2} \\ &= \left( \int_a^b \left\lvert \, (f-g)\, + \, (g-h) \, \right\rvert^2 \ \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{1/2} \\ &\leq \left( \int_a^b \left\lvert f-g \right\rvert^2 \, \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{1/2} + \left( \int_a^b \left\lvert g-h \right\rvert^2 \, \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{1/2} \qquad \mbox{ [ using Minkowski's inequality ] } \\ &= \lVert f-g \rVert_2 + \lVert g-h \rVert_2, \end{align} $$ as required.
Is my proof correct and the same as demanded by Rudin?
P.S.:
On $[a, b]$, as $$0 \leq \left\lvert f - h \right\rvert = \left\lvert (f-g) + (g-h) \right\rvert \leq \left\lvert f-g \right\rvert + \left\lvert g-h \right\rvert, $$ so \begin{align} & \ \ \ \left\lvert f - h \right\rvert^2 \\ &\leq \left( \left\lvert f-g \right\rvert + \left\lvert g-h \right\rvert \right)^2 \\ &= \left\lvert f-g \right\rvert^2 + 2 \left\lvert f-g \right\rvert \left\lvert g-h \right\rvert + \left\lvert g-h \right\rvert^2. \end{align} Therefore we have \begin{align} & \ \ \ \int_a^b \left\lvert f - h \right\rvert^2 \, \mathrm{d} \alpha \\ &\leq \int_a^b \left( \left\lvert f-g \right\rvert^2 + 2 \left\lvert f-g \right\rvert \left\lvert g-h \right\rvert + \left\lvert g-h \right\rvert^2 \right) \, \mathrm{d} \alpha \\ & \qquad \qquad \mbox{ [ by Theorem 6.12 (b) in Rudin ] } \\ &= \int_a^b \left\lvert f-g \right\rvert^2 \ \mathrm{d} \alpha + 2 \int_a^b \left\lvert f-g \right\rvert \left\lvert g-h \right\rvert \ \mathrm{d} \alpha + \int_a^b \left\lvert g-h \right\rvert^2 \ \mathrm{d} \alpha \\ &\qquad \qquad \mbox{ [ by Theorem 6.12 (a) in Rudin ] } \\ &\leq \int_a^b \left\lvert f-g \right\rvert^2 \ \mathrm{d} \alpha + 2 \left( \int_a^b \lvert f-g \rvert^{2} \ \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{1/2} \left( \int_a^b \lvert g - h \rvert^{2} \ \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{1/2} \\ & \qquad + \int_a^b \left\lvert g-h \right\rvert^2 \ \mathrm{d} \alpha \\ & \qquad \mbox{ [ by Holder's inequality for integrals with $p=2$ ] } \\ &= \left[ \left( \int_a^b \lvert f-g \rvert^2 \ \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{1/2} + \left( \int_a^b \lvert g - h \rvert^2 \ \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{1/2} \right]^2. \end{align} Thus we have obtained the inequality \begin{align} & \ \ \ \int_a^b \left\lvert f - h \right\rvert^2 \, \mathrm{d} \alpha \\ &\leq \left[ \left( \int_a^b \lvert f-g \rvert^2 \, \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{\frac12} + \left( \int_a^b \lvert g - h \rvert^2 \, \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{\frac12} \right]^2. \tag{1} \end{align}
Since all the integrals in (1) are non-negative (and so are their square roots), therefore upon taking the square roots on both sieds of (1), we obtain \begin{align} & \ \ \ \left( \int_a^b \left\lvert f - h \right\rvert^2 \, \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{\frac12} \\ & \leq \left( \int_a^b \lvert f-g \rvert^2 \, \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{\frac12} + \left( \int_a^b \lvert g - h \rvert^2 \, \mathrm{d} \alpha \right)^{\frac12} , \end{align} which is the same as $$ \lVert f-h \rVert_2 \leq \lVert f- g \rVert_2 + \lVert g-h \rVert_2, $$ as required.
Here are the links to some relevant Math SE posts of mine:
Probs. 10 (a), (b), and (c), Chap. 6, in Baby Rudin: Holder's Inequality for Integrals

Minkowski's inequality is the triangle inequality in this case, so you are using what you are asked to prove in your proof.
Since all the norms are nonnegative, it suffices to prove $$\|f-h\|_2^2 \le (\|f-g\|_2 + \|g-h\|_2)^2.$$ By writing $f-h=f-g+g-h$ and expanding both sides, we reduce the inequality to $$2\langle f-g,g-h\rangle \le 2 \|f-g\|_2 \|g-h\|_2,$$ where $$\langle f-g, g-h\rangle := \int_a^b (f-g)(g-h) \mathop{d\alpha}.$$ The above inequality is simply Cauchy-Schwarz.