I want to prove that the connected graph $G$ with $\delta(G) = 1$ and each vertex has a degree of $1$ or $2$, is a path. Can you tell whether my proof is correct?
Since $G$ is connected, there is a path between all of its vertices. Suppose that $u_1,\dots,u_i,\dots,u_n$ is a path from $u_1$ to $u_n$ which contains all vertices.
According to the assumption, there could not be a cycle in this path; because if there be a cycle, the degree of one vertex should be greater than $2$ and it's in contrast with the assumption. So the graph $G$ is a path.
We can make your proof work if we choose $u_1$ and $u_n$ carefully, but it does not work out of the box. Two problems:
So here is how we find the path instead. Since $\delta(G)=1$ there is a vertex of degree $1$. The total number of odd-degree vertices in a graph must be even, so there must be at least one more vertex of degree $1$. Let $s, t$ be two vertices of degree $1$; since $G$ is connected, there is a path $u_1, u_2, \dots, u_n$ with $u_1 = s$ and $u_n = t$.
We know that
So there are no edges out of $u_1, \dots, u_n$ other than the edges of the path. Since $G$ is connected, there cannot be any other vertices (they would have no way to get to vertices on this path). Therefore the path contains all the vertices and edges of the graph.