Show directly (from the definition) that if
$$a_n=1+\frac{1}{\sqrt{2}} +\frac{1}{\sqrt{3}} + ... + \frac{1}{\sqrt{n}}\;,$$
then $(a_n)$ is not a Cauchy sequence.
Attempt
Using $a_n$ is not Cauchy if $$\exists\, \varepsilon > 0 : \forall N\, \exists\, n, m > N | a_{n} - a_{m}| \geq \varepsilon$$
taking $n>m$.
$$\begin{align}|a_n - b_m| = \left|\sum_{k=1}^{n} \frac{1}{\sqrt{k}} - \sum_{l=1}^{m} \frac{1}{\sqrt{l}}\right| &= \left|\sum_{k=m+1}^{n} \frac{1}{\sqrt{k}}\right| \ge \left|\sum_{k=m+1}^{n} \frac{1}{n}\right| = \frac{n-m}{n}\\ \end{align} $$
Letting $n = 2m$
$$\frac{n-m}{n} = \frac{2m-m}{2m} = \frac{m}{2m} = \frac{1}{2}$$
Thus
$$\exists\, \varepsilon = \frac{1}{2} : \forall N\, \exists\, n=2m > m > N : \left|\sum_{k=m+1}^{n} \frac{1}{\sqrt{k}}\right| \geq \frac{1}{2}$$
so $a_n$ is not Cauchy.
Looks like a very well executed proof. There's only one typo, since $|a_n-b_m|$ should actually be $|a_n - a_m|$.
Also, you can just drop the absolute values at $$\sum_{k=m+1}^n\frac{1}{\sqrt k}$$
since the value is obviously positive.