I'm really new to natural deduction and proofs with this. But I've been trying to solve the problem on the attached paper for a while and I just don't feel my solution is correct.
Can someone help me with this and explain how I should be attacking these problems.
I want to prove that $(T ∧ ¬S) ∨ (¬T ∧ S), ¬(K ∧ F), T → K ∴ F → S$.
I'm trying to prove that F -> S
I've updated parts of the proof from row 4 with the information given to me below. Does it look better?

Line $10\;$of your original proof attempt is wrong. The operation $\lnot$ is not distributive over $\land$.
Instead, just use the fact that you've falsified the assumption $(t \land \lnot s)$.
That, together with the premise $(t \land \lnot s) \lor (\lnot t \land s)$, yields $(\lnot t \land s)$, which then yields $s$.
EDIT:
As user482338 correctly observes, after falsifying $(t \land \lnot s)$, you can't immediately use "or elimination".
Instead, since in the subproof you proved $\bot$, you can follow that with anything (since $\bot \rightarrow\;$"anything"). In particular, you can get $\bot \rightarrow s$, so that subproof yields $(t \land \lnot s) \rightarrow s$.
To make use of "or elimination", your next goal is to prove $(\lnot t \land s) \rightarrow s$, which can be accomplished with an easy subproof.
Then you can apply "or elimination" to get $s$.
Here's a modified version of your proof, with appropriate corrections . . . \begin{align*} 1.&\;\;\;(t \land \lnot s) \lor (\lnot t \land s)&&(\text{P})\\[4pt] 2.&\;\;\;\lnot(k \land f)&&(\text{P})\\[4pt] 3.&\;\;\;t \rightarrow k&&(\text{P})\\[4pt] 4.&\;\;\;f&&(\text{A})\\[4pt] 5.&\;\;\;\;\qquad t \land \lnot s&&(\text{A})\\[4pt] 6.&\;\;\;\;\qquad t&&(\land\,\text{E})&&5\\[4pt] 7.&\;\;\;\;\qquad k&&(\rightarrow\text{E})&&6,3\\[4pt] 8.&\;\;\;\;\qquad k \land f&&(\land\,\text{I})&&4,7\\[4pt] 9.&\;\;\;\;\qquad \bot &&(\bot\,\text{I})&&8,2\\[4pt] 10.&\;\;\;\;\qquad s &&(\bot\,\text{E})&&9\\[4pt] 11.&\;\;\;(t \land \lnot s) \rightarrow s&&(\rightarrow\text{I})&&5\text{$-$}10\\[4pt] 12.&\;\;\;\;\qquad \lnot t \land s&&(\text{A})\\[4pt] 13.&\;\;\;\;\qquad s&&(\land\,\text{E})&&12\\[4pt] 14.&\;\;\;(\lnot t \land s) \rightarrow s&&(\rightarrow\text{I})&&12\text{$-$}13\\[4pt] 15.&\;\;\;s&&(\lor\,\text{E})&&1,11,14\\[4pt] 16.&\;\;\;f \rightarrow s&&(\rightarrow\text{I})&&4,15\\[4pt] \end{align*}