I'm a CS student. I commonly notice that when I'm learning math-heavy topics (like machine learning) that the descriptions often seem overly tedious and unintuitive, like the one below.
Vector spaces are the basic setting in which linear algebra happens. A vector space $V$ is a set (the elements of which are called vectors) on which two operations are defined: vectors can be added together, and vectors can be multiplied by real numbers called scalars. $V$ must satisfy
- There exists an additive identity (written $0$) in $V$ such that $x + 0 = x$ for all $x\in V$.
- For each $x\in V$, there exists an additive inverse (written $−x$) such that $x + (−x) = 0$.
- There exists a multiplicative identity (written $1$) in $\mathbb{R}$ such that $1x = x$ for all $x\in V$.
- Commutativity: $x + y = y + x$ for all $x,y\in V$.
- Associativity: $(x + y) + z = x + (y + z)$ and $\alpha(\beta x) = (\alpha \beta)x$ for all $x,y,z\in V$ and $\alpha,\beta\in\mathbb{R}$.
- Distributivity: $\alpha(x + y) = \alpha x + \alpha y$ and $(\alpha+\beta)x = \alpha x + \beta x$ for all $x,y\in V$ and $\alpha,\beta\in\mathbb{R}$.
Why do we even need to specify these rules? It seems fairly obvious that in 1., $x +0 =x$. If fact, I can't think of a case where that wouldn't be true.
This definition describes the structures where the theorems about vectors can be proved. One such important theorem describes the set of solutions to a set of linear equations as sums of solutions to the homogeneous equation added to a particular solution to the inhomogeneous equation. You need all those rules to establish that. There are many much deeper theorems, not at all obvious (and used in machine learning), that follow from the same properties.
I'm surprised that you find the axioms unintuitive. What about them violates your intuition? "Tedious" suggests that there are too many. I think there are very few given the depth of results that follow from them.
In answer to the particular question in the last paragraph, Axiom 1 asserts the existence of a vector with a certain property. It fails for the set of positive real numbers under addition, so that set with that operation can't be a vector space. The theorems about vector spaces fail there.