Random vector $X = ( X_1, X_2, \dots, X_n) $ is uniformly distributed on the unit sphere in $\mathbb{R}^n$
Find $M_2 =E[X_1^2], M_4= E[X_1^4]$
In this case, author asks to find out second and fourth moments of random variable X.
Author's Solution: Since $X_i$ are identically distributed and $\displaystyle\sum_{i=1}^n X^2_i =1. $ It readily follows that $M_2= \displaystyle\frac{1}{n}$
For $M_4$, first note that by squaring $\displaystyle\sum_{i=1}^n X^2_i =1 $ and taking expectation we obtain $$n M_4 + n(n-1)V_{12}=1 \tag {1}\label{(1)}$$ where $V_{12}=E\left[X_1^2X_2^2\right]$.
Thus, to complete the solution, we need another relation between $M_4$ and $V_{12}$.
To this end, note that $(X_1, X_2)$ and $\left(\displaystyle\frac{X_1 + X_2}{\sqrt{2}}, \displaystyle\frac{X_1-X_2}{\sqrt{2}}\right)$ are identically distributed. Hence $E\left[\displaystyle\frac{(X_1 +X_2)^2 (X_1 -X_2)^2}{4}\right] = E\left[X_1^2X_2^2\right]$ which after expanding gives $M_4 = 3V_{12}$
Combined with \eqref{(1)}, this yields $M_4= \displaystyle\frac{3}{n(n+2)}$
Author's remark(1)
A common way to generate uniform distribution on the sphere is to take $X_i=\displaystyle\frac{Z_i}{\sqrt{Z_1^2 +Z_2^2 +\dots, +Z_n^2}}$, where $Z_i$ are independent standard Normal random variables.
My thoughts
We know $V_{12}=E[X_1^2X_2^2]= E\left[\displaystyle\frac{X_1^4 -2X_1^2X_2^2 +X_2^4}{4}\right]$
If we substitute the aforesaid value of $V_{12}$ in \eqref{(1)} we get $$nE[X_1^4] + n^2\frac{E[X_1^4]}{4}- 2\cdot n^2\frac{E[X_1^2X_2^2]}{4} + n^2\frac{E[X_2^4]}{4} -n\frac{E[X_1^4]}{4} + 2\cdot n \frac{[X_1^2X_2^2]}{4} - n\frac{E[X_2^4]}{4}=1$$
Now how to proceed further?
Note: I performed further computations but I didn't get $E[X_1^4]=3V_{12}$. That's why I stuck at this step.
New thoughts (after reopening of the post and publication of the accepted answer):
Combined with \eqref{(1)}, $M_4 = 3V_{12}$ we get $M_4= \displaystyle\frac{3}{n(n+2)}$
Working:
We know $V_{12}=E[X_1^2X_2^2]= E\left[\displaystyle\frac{X_1^4 -2X_1^2X_2^2 +X_2^4}{4}\right]= \displaystyle\frac{M_4}{3}$
If we substitute $V_{12}=E\left[\displaystyle\frac{X_1^4 -2X_1^2X_2^2 +X_2^4}{4}\right]$ in \eqref{(1)} we get $$nE[X_1^4] +\frac{n(n-1)}4\left(E(X_1^4)-2E(X_1^2X_2^2)+E(X_2^4)\right)=1.$$
If you solve for $M_4= E[X_1^4]$ we get $$\left[ E[X_1^4] - E[X_1^2X_2^2]\right] =\displaystyle\frac{2}{n(n+2)}$$. Substituting $V_{12}=\displaystyle\frac{M_4}{3}$ we get, $M_4=\displaystyle\frac{3}{n(n+2)}$
Expanding $E\left[\displaystyle\frac{(X_1 +X_2)^2 (X_1 -X_2)^2}{4}\right] = E\left[X_1^2X_2^2\right]$ and using that $E[X_2^4]=E[X_1^4]=M_4$ and $E\left[X_1^2X_2^2\right]=V_{12}$ gives immediately $V_{12}=\frac{M_4}3$. It is this expression of $V_{12}$ which the author substitued in $n M_4 + n(n-1)V_{12}=1$.
Edit 5 days later to expand this answer, hopefully letting you understand why you (old and new) thoughts were not adequate: