$X,Y,Z$ are random variables. $Y$ is integrable. $X$ and $Z$ are independent, so the espectation of $X$ doesn't affect the expectation of $Z$.
$\sigma(\cdot)$ is the $\sigma$-algebra generated by the respective random variable. This is my resoning:
$$ \sigma(E[Y\mid X]) \subset \sigma(X) $$ $$ \sigma(E[Y\mid Z]) \subset \sigma(Z) $$
Then $\sigma(E[Y\mid X])$ and $\sigma(E[Y\mid Z])$ are independient too:
$$ E(E[Y\mid X]\cdot E[Y\mid Z]) = E(E[Y\mid X])\cdot E(E[Y\mid Z]) = E[Y]\cdot E[Y] = (E[Y])^2 $$
I want to know if I'm right.
Your calculations are correct.