I understand that my solution here is probably not the most efficient (My professor's solution is "cleaner") but it is how my mind attacked the problem. I have been losing lots of points for minor details that I've been unable to see. Does the following proof hold? Am I making any major (or minor) errors?
\begin{align*} \left| \frac{1}{2+\sqrt{x}}-\frac{1}{3}\right|&\leq\left|\frac{1}{2+\sqrt{x}}\right|+\left|\frac{1}{3}\right|<\epsilon~~~\mbox{(by triangle inequality)}\\ &\implies\left|\frac{1}{2+\sqrt{x}}\right|+\frac{1}{3}<\epsilon\\ &\implies\left|\frac{1}{2+\sqrt{x}}\right| < \epsilon-\frac{1}{3}\\ &\implies \frac{1}{2} < \epsilon-\frac{1}{3}~~~~\mbox{(Because, }\sqrt{x}~\mbox{only a real number when } x\geq 0.)\\ &\implies 1<2(\epsilon-\frac{1}{3})\\ &\implies \left|x-1\right|<2\epsilon-\frac{2}{3}=\delta~~~~\mbox{(Because, choosing }x~s.t.~0<x<2\implies~-1<x-1<1)\\ \end{align*} $\therefore \left|x-1\right|<\delta\implies\left| \frac{1}{2+\sqrt{x}}-\frac{1}{3}\right|<\epsilon$ and $\displaystyle\lim_{x\to 1}\frac{1}{2+\sqrt{x}}=\frac{1}{3}$
What you did cannot possibly work. Since, for any $x\in\mathbb R$,$$\left\lvert\frac1{2+\sqrt x}\right\rvert+\frac13\geqslant\frac13,$$ if $\varepsilon\in\left(0,\frac13\right)$, then there is no $\delta>0$ such that$$\lvert x-1\rvert<\delta\implies\left\lvert\frac1{2+\sqrt x}\right\rvert+\frac13<\varepsilon.$$Note that\begin{align}\left\lvert\frac1{2+\sqrt x}-\frac13\right\rvert&=\left\lvert\frac{1-\sqrt x}{3\left(2+\sqrt x\right)}\right\rvert\\&\leqslant\frac{\left\lvert\sqrt x-1\right\rvert}6\\&=\frac{\left\lvert\left(\sqrt x-1\right)\left(\sqrt x+1\right)\right\rvert}{6\left(\sqrt x+1\right)}\\&\leqslant\frac{\left\lvert x-1\right\rvert}6.\end{align}So, for each $\varepsilon>0$, take $\delta=6\varepsilon$.