I just wanted to see if I was thinking about this in the right way
Say we have the function $f(x)=2x^2-4x-7$
In compledted square form that gives us $f(x)=2(x-1)^2-9$
this gives $(1,-9)$ as the coordinates of the vertex
now lets say we have to translate that vertex to the point $(-1,-5)$
so we're mapping all x values by negative two and all y values by 4.
so then would our function become
$y+4=2(x-2)^2-4(x-2)-7$
giving us a copmpleted square form of
$f(x)=2(x-3)^2-13$
is that the right way to be thinking about this ?
Clearly, the answer is $y = 2(x+1)^2-5$.
Now, to correct your mistake.
It should be
\begin{align}y\color{red}-4&=2((x\color{red}+2)-1)^2-9 \\ y&=2(x+1)^2-9+4 \\ &=2(x+1)^2-5\end{align}
A possible relevant read on why we replace $x$ by $x+2$ to shift left by $2$ units.